Taylor LaVie's Book: The Mixer at Lace & Leash

A week ago I covered Taylor LaVie's world of Boywives. LaVie has a new book out and wanted to share a portion of his sexy book The Mixer at Lace & Leash. I love LaVie's philosophy and appreciation of the feminized male taking on the submissive role of a woman. 

Link to LaVie's book at Amazon: 

The Mixer at Lace & Leash

 

Book Review: Lara Longstaff's High Heel Challenge

High Heel Challenge by Lara Longstaff tells the story of young computer programmer Dakota’s transformation into a girl after losing a bet to his friend’s beautiful successful sister, Hannah. One day while playing video games with his best friend’s Gabriel, Dakota opened his big mouth and stated that heels are nothing and anybody can handle while Gabe’s sister Hannah was coming home from her office job that pays better than both boys jobs combined. 

Not liking Dakota’s sexist attitude she proposes a bet that will change Dakota opinion and much more of the young man. Hannah’s bet is if Dakota can last a whole day in women’s heels, then she will agree to clean his apartment dressed as a sexy maid, but if Dakota fails to last a day in women’s heels, he has to do whatever Hannah says for a week!

Sample: 

“My apartment could use some cleaning, How about you drees up in that French maid costume you wore for Halloween and come over to place after work to tidy up?” He chuckled. 

“You’re a dirty pervert,” she snorted. 

Of course Dakota fails to last a day in high heels, with the place being an amusement park as the location. With Hannah winning the bet, (spoiler alert) she decides to make over Dakota into a pretty girl…well of course!

One of the best qualities of the book is Longstaff’s simple approach to the feminization genre. However she also unfortunately glosses over many parts that would have been great had she developed a bit. The makeover is glossed over and would have made for a great read had it given details of Dakota’s discomfort into being made over into a cute short haired girl.

The humiliation is there in the dialogue in the way Hannah sets up Dakota’s transformation, but the climax of the book…although a bit surprising a bit (maybe for me) lacks further explanation. Without giving anything away, you would think that there is more to the sister’s involvement, but no explanation is given. Maybe Dakota falling while wearing those high heels did something to his mind and he liked being a girl afterward. A little explanation at the end would have been nice. 

Dakota completely accepting her feminine submissive role.

Not a bad story, some good sexy moments and decent emasculation dialogue with a confident beautiful young lady changing a misogynist into a sweet lovely girl. Pick it up if you have never heard of Lara Longstaff or if you want a quick sexy read. 

Amazon Link: 

High Heel Challenge

Link to Kylie Gable's Doubling Down a free ebook

A while ago, Kylie Gable made available for free one of her stories, Doubling Down. Sorry to the fans for not making this aware to them.

 I read Kylie Gable's Doubling Down story and I was impressed and loved how the girls capture the boys. I said once and I will say it again, Kylie is a master at entraping males in her stories. Just read any story from her and you will see why. Which is why I was excited to see her share one of her finest examples of her skill as a gift to potential new readers.

This story features one of the best and smartest entrapment moments in any forced feminization story. Kylie is a master at writing blackmailing plots against her male characters.

This story is no different! The Hawthorne sisters decide to payback the Martin twin boys next door one day while both teenager's parents are away. They feminize the boys through panties, makeovers and dates with other boys!

This story feature forced crossdressing, and some forced bisexuality.

Link to free copy
Doubling Down
Great read!

Perils of Paul: Consequences now published!

Perils of Paul: Consequences is now published on Amazon Kindle!

It is the first book published by me and author Valerie Whip!

Ever since they were little Paul and his sister have had an interesting relationship involving girl clothes. Things get interesting for Paul one day when he is caught by his sister in her clothes and then is blackmailed into doing her bidding which leads to a girl sleepover party that he will never forget!

Some may remember the story on Fictionmania and this blog, but this story has been revised and expanded.

It features new illustrations to help bring to life the more erotic scenes!

Excerpt:

I just couldn’t get over how I felt wearing my sister’s clothes. It was exciting and forbidden. I liked the feel of the silky fabrics and the way I could flip up the hem of her short skirts to reveal my thigh and ass. It was just so much fun. Over the years I continued to invade my sister’s room and wear her clothes whenever possible. My sister would accuse me of being in her things every once in a while but I would always denied it. I guess I must have gotten bold or just plain stupid. 

I began to try on her clothes almost every time she was out of the house and I felt I had enough time to play with her things. My sister was a flirt. She loved turning guys on my wearing sexy clothes or rolling her shirt shorter after she left the house. Her clothes became even more fun to play with because she was buying really sexy lingerie. I even found a condom in her drawer under her bras.  I think over the next couple of years I tried on all her underwear and half of her skirts, blouses and dresses. 

It is at $2.99 on Amazon Kindle, download a copy and let us know what you think.

Thank you,

Link:

Perils of Paul: Consequences

Book Announcement: Perils of Paul: Consequences

Dear Fans and Friends of the Blog,

I'm happy and proud to announce that I along with Valerie Whip will soon be releasing Perils of Paul: Consequences to Amazon Kindle.

It will feature 5 new illustrations to help bring this forced feminization short story to life!

This new revised version of Valerie's tale goes deeper (no pun intended) into Paul's secret fascination with girl's clothing and features expanded dialogue and erotic scenes!

I want to invite all fans of erotic fiction to pick up a copy when it is released and and let us know what you think.

Thank you!  

Link:
Perils of Paul: Consequences

Pick of the Week: Bridled by the Bridesmaids

This week's Pick of the Week comes from Kylie Gable and Claudia Acosta with their Bridled by the Bridesmaids story.

A tale of bridesmaids trying to help their good friend Page by trying to "correct" her fiance's rude drunken behavior through feminizing him.

The story offers more than the regular cliches in the genre, Gable and Acosta blend pro wrestling with feminization successfully to give the tired wedding-themed feminization story new life! Very smart and witty dialogue!

Link:
Bridled by the Bridesmaids 

Review and Illustration: M.C Questgend's The Nightmare Vacation

Chris surprised by his new female body. 

M.C Questgend’s The Nightmare Vacation, starts out with recent college graduate Chris Granger taking a vacation trip through Europe. While stopping by Amsterdam he succumbs to a mysterious illness which causes great pain, emergency surgery is needed. When Chris wakes up free from the immense pain, but that the doctors had accidently performed gender reassignment on him as well! Now he has to deal with being a female while on vacation!

With the title “The Nightmare Vacation,” you almost believe that the story would be a Hostel-like feminization story, but in reality you have a story about a young man coming to terms with his new skin as a young woman and the relationships that emerge from the change into the opposite sex.

M.C writes treats her readers to plenty of surprises as Chris returns back to America as she tries to reconnect with everyone. You would think nothing would shock you from the trauma from waking up a girl, but M.C writes treats her readers to plenty of surprises as Chris returns back to. M.C has a talent for shaking things up when you least expect it. Chris or Christine’s interaction with her family is well put together as a tense and awkward experience. The father struggles to look his new daughter in the eye.
The author has a way in making you care about the characters. The sense of isolation that Christine goes through most of the book is done very well. Unfortunately I’m left wondering what would the story had been if she slowed down a bit in certain portions of the story. The story is easy to read, but she glosses over many parts of the story. The first part of the book feels as if the author was in a rush to get to the sex transformation. We also are left with little to no descriptions of the physical characteristics of the characters in the book.

When it comes to the more intimate moments of the story, M.C delivers on the erotic department! The buildup to her first sexual encounter is done surprisingly well and the last one is sensuous borderline raunchy! However there are a few problems or scenes that feel a little out of place in a soft sentimental semi-erotic self discovery novel, but would feel just right at home on a rated R Fictionmania story (no offense, I love Fictionmania). Without spoiling too much, the inner slut in Christine takes over in one scene causing a bit of turbulence in the flow of M.C’s style of writing.

A missed opportunity is missed by not fully exploring the inner conflict inside Chris regarding his sexuality. The reader never really believes Christine is fully heterosexual, alas a great opportunity to help give a little more dimension to our heroine is missed. However a later trauma in the book helps flesh out the Chris character out in a different way which ultimately helps her welcome the future as a woman.

The Nightmare Vacation is available now through Amazon.

Click Here for the Link: The Nightmare Vacation

Click Here for the Link to M.C Questgend website

The Jaguar: The City of Fire and Rage Illustrated is finally out!

The Jaguar in pursuit of a local thug  

Well it's finally out! The Jaguar: The City of Fire and Rage written by Kylie Gable and Claudia Acosta with illustrations by your favorite underground feminization artist (Annabelle B.) has officially hit Amazon!  


It was a joy to work on the illustrations with Kylie. Some of you remember her from my review of her Calendar Girl story and The Alpha Theta Nu series.

The cover for second Jaguar book.

A little about The Jaguar, the story is in the tradition of pulp classics like The Shadow, Doc Savage and The Spider. Sheila Wentworth is a masked vigilante by night named The Jaguar who along with her mysterious and beautiful partner Katsumi, fight foes that oppress and torment the innocent and the vulnerable using a mix of intelligence, martial arts and feminization as well as tools, gadgets and toys to inflict their unique brand of "justice."

This is the second Jaguar ebook by Gable and Acosta, but the book beautifully introduces the main characters and their world to new readers. In this book, the sexy ladies uncover a plot by a sinister enemy to push outcitizens of the LGBTQ community using fear and violence! The action is good and the story is well written. Fans of forced feminization will not be disappointed. The book contains two of my most erotic illustrations I have ever done to help bring the story to life.

As a fan of the genre and comic books I enjoyed reading this story. I'm very proud to be a part of it. I strongly encourage my friends and fans purchase and download a copy. It is available at $2.99 on Amazon (that's a practically the cost of a cup of coffee at your local Starbucks). It is a bargain for great story content, entertainment and of course some great art. I cannot stress this enough, please take a look into The Jaguar and let me know what you think.

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Kylie Gable's Calendar Girl review/illustration on the way

My apologize for not updating the blog. Thanks to all those who continuing to enjoy this blog and messaging me.

I have been finding time to work at my drawing desk and my computer coloring and re-editing (Hastings profiles, Valerie project, Sub Sissy) illustrations for the blog, so don't fret fans!

I'm finishing up a review/illustration for (right) Kylie Gable's Calendar Girl a spin off/semi-sequel to Alpha Theta Nu series. I have a few things to say about it and it should be soon in my reviews section.

 

Forced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm: Coed Transforms College Kid into a Sexy Slut Book Review

"Like what you see," says "Melody" (Mark).  

Alright, its that time again when we look inside another erotic story on the theme of feminization. This week we look into Mindi Harris' Forced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm: Coed Transforms College Kid into a Sexy Slut.

Now that’s a mouthful of a title! A story title like that suggests that the story will be one of those orgies of over the top cum filled festivals where the boys are blackmailed by the girls into becoming female street walkers, but surprisingly its actually pretty tame with a cute story and sexy scenes that would have worked perfectly for a storyline on forced fem for MTV’s late night soap drama, Undressed show from the late 90’s/early 2000’s.

The story doesn’t waste too much time laying down the foundation for the boy to girl transformation. The story begins with Mark a college freshman whose nerdy qualities have followed him from high school, but that’s not all that follows him. It seems that a girl named Stephanie, from his high school also is enrolled at the same college. Rumor is Stephanie used to dress boys as girls during high school!

We quickly learn that both have a little history together. After a quick recap (it feels like recap of a previous book, which would be a good idea Mindi *wink*wink*) of what occurred during Stephanie’s failed attempt to pretty up Mark into becoming her “slave girl” through the high school’s “Slave Auction,” (an interesting idea) an event set up for charity. Fast forward back to the present, after getting into a foolish bet with Stephanie over who has the largest breasts (Mark has unusually large amounts of fatty tissue around his breasts) set up by the jocks and Steph to entrap him into Mark is being prettied up into a Melody by Steph and her girlfriends.

Cover Art for the book

Forced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm, is well put together and the pacing is great! Unfortunately the pacing is too good! The story could have benefited from slowing down a bit in certain areas especially for the more intimate scenes where a little more description could have enhanced the story. Although the erotic moments are great (we do read erotic literature for the sex right?), it is not anything we haven’t seen before. (or at least I haven’t). A few stand out moments where an encounter with a mysterious dominatrix and the lead up to a cute intimate experience at the story’s climax (pun intended). 

The breakout star in this book is not Mark (although he is at the central character), but Stephanie, whose obsessive personality is well told by Harris. The dialogue involving her was showed off the talent of Harris. A prequel involving her would be an interesting read learning a about her past shocking activities during high school!

Like Kylie Gable, Harris isn’t overly descriptive in the outfits, accessories, underwear and hairstyle she puts on melody, but leaves lot plenty of liberty for her readers to visualize. In other words, she gives you a basic broad view of her vision.In the dress department, the outfits that “Melody” wears are cute! I can’t remember the last time I found a ballerina outfit adorable. A little outdated, but great to see  a contemporary author bring it back.

Thankfully the story never drags on or lets you down with an anti climatic ending. She ends her story at the right time and leaves you with a mix of identity questioning and optimism (a sequel is possible though). It may be the perfect forced fem story for you if you have always wanted to read one, but have been put off by other stories riddled with body modifications, extreme piercings and overuse of body fluids that flood the internet. In the end the story shows it has heart, despite what the title says of course...

Overall Grade:

3/5 Stars *** 

Grade: B

The Boys of Alpha Theta Nu Book Review

"Candy" (Matt Landon) being prepared for his porn movie debut.  

Its been a little while since my last review, recently I started looking into pay-for-reading stories on Amazon. One of the stories that grabbed my attention is Kylie Gable and Claudia Acosta’s The Boys of Alpha Theta Nu Collection. 

This first person narrative centers around a Freshman at the Midwestern institution of DuPont College named Matt Landon. Landon has had his heart set on pledging Alpha Theta Nu at the college since learning about their wild parties through his brother Davis, an alumni of the college. Matt quickly realizes that as a pledge, “Hell Week” is going to be Hell in what his frat brothers agree in letting the girls from the sorority Delta Delta Omicron (DDO) to participate in the pledges humiliation…..which begins to foreshadow what is to come for Matt and his pals. Matt’s name is then changed to Candy by the frat and the sorority (cute name) begins wearing bra and panties under his boy clothes and endure changing clothes in front of the sorority girls.

Candy is assigned to Elizabeth who is his “Big Sister,” and after being put through some light humiliations by Elizabeth and being made to do a raunchy home movie with fellow pledges, “Dollface” and “Barbie” to show his commitment to the frat, Matt then begins to question the trials and the emphasis on the increased feminization of the boys. The stress and strangeness gets to Matt eventually leading to his decision to leave the frat, however after attempting to leave the frat he gets pulled into a panty raid on the house of the DDO that goes terribly wrong. Matt and his fellow pledge brothers, Barbie and Dollface soon find themselves captured by the girls and slowly realize that Matt’ suspicions may be right after all. Thus leading to an unforgettable forced feminization scene that made this reviewer heart race like it was my first time reading a story of this genre.

The story is large and would not be considered a short story. What Gable and company do so well for the story is how they well they entrap and set-up up the boys, it is beautifully done! The girls of Delta Delta Omicron are incredibly organized and use the college's resources realistically. It has been stated that character development is her strength, I have to respectfully disagree. It is the way the girls set-up the boys to fall into a trap and the only way to get out is to go in deeper.

The sex scenes are hot! The outfits range from cute to slutty. Gable is not as descriptive as other authors in the genre, but its ok because it allows the reader to add to the imagination. The language is never really vulgar, but instead honest.

One refreshing aspect of the story is that Matt is not some closeted crossdresser or troubled/lazy young man (forced fem stories are riddled with them), but he is just a teen that unfortunately gets pulled into this due to his associations. Just to put this out there the erotic school girl movie that our three heroines starred in cannot be topped and it is one of the highlights of the story. There is one mark that Kylie misses in her story in the creativity of her sex scenes and that is a scene that involved Candy being left on a bed as a gift for a drunken frat guy. Had it been allowed to fully play out, it would have been memorable…oh well.

The book does take on some serious themes and I am glad Gable explorers it. One question that is asked, Who decided the girls should have the right to punish the boys through forced feminization? That question is put out there by the writer and is used as an instrument to move the story. Something that I wished that the writer would have taken advantage of more is the multi ethnic populations that colleges have become. The story primarily takes place on a college campus, but we don’t really get much diversity in the cast of characters.

The story also touches on racism and attempted suicide, but never fully explores them, instead it goes back to the question above which plays a part in helping Candy and boys find a way to try to escape their feminized lifestyle. The story has a firm storyline and towards the middle it offers a surprise twist and begins building towards a climatic showdown with the books primary antagonist, but it never fully materializes. It almost feels as if the author became exhausted towards the end and decided to end the story on her terms, but Gable’s creativity in sexy scenarios is what readers will take away from the book. 4/5 Stars!