Thursday, February 18, 2016

Forced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm: Coed Transforms College Kid into a Sexy Slut Book Review

"Like what you see," says "Melody" (Mark).  

Alright, its that time again when we look inside another erotic story on the theme of feminization. This week we look into Mindi HarrisForced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm: Coed Transforms College Kid into a Sexy Slut.

Now that’s a mouthful of a title! A story title like that suggests that the story will be one of those orgies of over the top cum filled festivals where the boys are blackmailed by the girls into becoming female street walkers, but surprisingly its actually pretty tame with a cute story and sexy scenes that would have worked perfectly for a storyline on forced fem for MTV’s late night soap drama, Undressed show from the late 90’s/early 2000’s.

The story doesn’t waste too much time laying down the foundation for the boy to girl transformation. The story begins with Mark a college freshman whose nerdy qualities have followed him from high school, but that’s not all that follows him. It seems that a girl named Stephanie, from his high school also is enrolled at the same college. Rumor is Stephanie used to dress boys as girls during high school!

We quickly learn that both have a little history together. After a quick recap (it feels like recap of a previous book, which would be a good idea Mindi *wink*wink*) of what occurred during Stephanie’s failed attempt to pretty up Mark into becoming her “slave girl” through the high school’s “Slave Auction,” (an interesting idea) an event set up for charity. Fast forward back to the present, after getting into a foolish bet with Stephanie over who has the largest breasts (Mark has unusually large amounts of fatty tissue around his breasts) set up by the jocks and Steph to entrap him into Mark is being prettied up into a Melody by Steph and her girlfriends.

Cover Art for the book
Forced Feminized and Dominated at the Dorm, is well put together and the pacing is great! Unfortunately the pacing is too good! The story could have benefited from slowing down a bit in certain areas especially for the more intimate scenes where a little more description could have enhanced the story. Although the erotic moments are great (we do read erotic literature for the sex right?), it is not anything we haven’t seen before. (or at least I haven’t). A few stand out moments where an encounter with a mysterious dominatrix and the lead up to a cute intimate experience at the story’s climax (pun intended). 

The breakout star in this book is not Mark (although he is at the central character), but Stephanie, whose obsessive personality is well told by Harris. The dialogue involving her was showed off the talent of Harris. A prequel involving her would be an interesting read learning a about her past shocking activities during high school!

Like Kylie Gable, Harris isn’t overly descriptive in the outfits, accessories, underwear and hairstyle she puts on melody, but leaves lot plenty of liberty for her readers to visualize. In other words, she gives you a basic broad view of her vision.In the dress department, the outfits that “Melody” wears are cute! I can’t remember the last time I found a ballerina outfit adorable. A little outdated, but great to see  a contemporary author bring it back.

Thankfully the story never drags on or lets you down with an anti climatic ending. She ends her story at the right time and leaves you with a mix of identity questioning and optimism (a sequel is possible though). It may be the perfect forced fem story for you if you have always wanted to read one, but have been put off by other stories riddled with body modifications, extreme piercings and overuse of body fluids that flood the internet. In the end the story shows it has heart, despite what the title says of course...

Overall Grade:

3/5 Stars *** 

Grade: B

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Quick Pick of the Week

Like Father Like Son, by Willow Cage is one of those strange mysterious tales that could become an urban myth. A young man comes home from his all boys school and finds his father in an very surprising position with another man. The author Cage, waves her short story like a Alice in Wonderland tale, with the boy having his whole world turned upside down and introduced to a whole new side of his father and himself. 

"Don't you worry about a thing sweetie. You'll be fantastic," he assured
me. "Your mom and I had speculated that you were gay since you hit
puberty. I mean, you're eighteen years old. You've never had a
girlfriend. Your manner of dress is awfully... androgynous and, well, you
just let your father give you your first blowjob." He smiled sweetly.

The story is rather soft in tone, yet explicit. Willow intelligently knows when to end her story.  

There is incest (I cringed a bit), but consensual. Not for everyone.      

Sunday, February 14, 2016

Looking for a reliable editor

Hello everyone,

I'm working with Caroline to bring a few more artwork to Man Dating, but unfortunately it's going to be a little slow process. Caroline is looking for an editor to help with her story. If you are interested or know someone, please contact me or leave a comment below.

Thank you!

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

New stories added!

Hi you all!

I recently spoke to Jennifer Reed and Caroline and they both gave me their permission to add their stories, Jenifer's Princess of Aragon and Caroline's Man Dating.

On another note, yes I have another review/illustration on the way and no I have not forgotten about Adventure at the Mall's art. Its almost done. Please be patient on that, I'm only one person.

Thanks for the support.

Thursday, February 4, 2016

Miss Donna's The Party story now added

With her permission, I uploaded The Party by Miss Donna on the Erotic Feminization Literature section of the website. Enjoy!

Also, Caroline and me are working together again. She recently allowed me the permission to host her story Man Dating on this blog!

Quick Pick of the Week- A Visit To His Aunt by Throne

Hi everyone,

Just wanted to recommend a very spicy story that I read, A Visit to his Aunt by author Throne on Fictionmania.

It has a simple story, a boy goes back to face his aunt after she had pettiecoated him, but realizes he is in over his head. Simple and and somewhat soft. Throne makes good creative use of a "gag lips."

Read the story here