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| "Like what you see," says "Melody" (Mark). |
Now that’s a mouthful of a title! A story title like that
suggests that the story will be one of those orgies of over the top cum filled
festivals where the boys are blackmailed by the girls into becoming female street
walkers, but surprisingly its actually pretty tame with a cute story and sexy scenes
that would have worked perfectly for a storyline on forced fem for MTV’s late
night soap drama,
Undressed show from
the late 90’s/early 2000’s.
The story doesn’t waste too much time laying down the
foundation for the boy to girl transformation. The story begins with Mark a
college freshman whose nerdy qualities have followed him from high school, but
that’s not all that follows him. It seems that a girl named Stephanie, from his
high school also is enrolled at the same college. Rumor is Stephanie used to
dress boys as girls during high school!
We quickly learn that both have a little history together. After
a quick recap (it feels like recap of a previous book, which would be a good
idea Mindi *wink*wink*) of what occurred during Stephanie’s failed attempt to
pretty up Mark into becoming her “slave girl” through the high school’s “Slave
Auction,” (an interesting idea) an event set up for charity. Fast forward back
to the present, after getting into a foolish bet with Stephanie over who has
the largest breasts (Mark has unusually large amounts of fatty tissue around
his breasts) set up by the jocks and Steph to entrap him into Mark is being
prettied up into a Melody by Steph and her girlfriends.
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| Cover Art for the book |
Forced Feminized and
Dominated at the Dorm, is well put together and the pacing is great!
Unfortunately the pacing is too good! The story could have benefited from
slowing down a bit in certain areas especially for the more intimate scenes
where a little more description could have enhanced the story. Although the
erotic moments are great (we do read erotic literature for the sex right?), it
is not anything we haven’t seen before. (or at least I haven’t). A few stand
out moments where an encounter with a mysterious dominatrix and the lead up to
a cute intimate experience at the story’s climax (pun intended).
The breakout star in this book is not Mark (although he is
at the central character), but Stephanie, whose obsessive personality is well
told by Harris. The dialogue involving her was showed off the talent of Harris.
A prequel involving her would be an interesting read learning a about her past shocking
activities during high school!
Like
Kylie Gable, Harris isn’t overly descriptive in the
outfits, accessories, underwear and hairstyle she puts on melody, but leaves
lot plenty of liberty for her readers to visualize. In other words, she gives
you a basic broad view of her vision.In the dress department, the outfits that
“Melody” wears are cute! I can’t remember the last time I found a ballerina
outfit adorable. A little outdated, but great to see a contemporary author bring it back.
Thankfully the story never drags on or lets you down with an anti
climatic ending. She ends her story at the right time and leaves you with a mix
of identity questioning and optimism (a sequel is possible though). It may be
the perfect forced fem story for you if you have always wanted to read one, but
have been put off by other stories riddled with body modifications, extreme
piercings and overuse of body fluids that flood the internet. In the end the story shows it has heart, despite what the title says of course...
Overall Grade:
3/5 Stars ***
Grade: B
