Book Review: The Valentine's Day Massacre

This review is late, but in a way it is a good thing it did as the tittle of Kylie Gable's and Claudia Acosta's Valentines Day Massacre would have been bad timing on the tragic day this past Febuary the 14th when a young man enetered his former high school with the sole purpose to murder the school's students.

Gable's story is set around Valentine's Day with jealous slacker screw-up high school senior Bobby looking to play a prank on his overachieving sister Scarlet. Bobby's best friend Tony is in a similar position in his life with a twin sister that calls the shots in their household.

While serving time in detention Bobby comes up with a plan to play a prank on his sister by enlisting his friend Tony in prentending to be Scarlet's secret admirer. The idea is mutually shared as Bobby will pretend to be the secret admirer of Ashley (Tony's twin sister), whom Bobby has lusted for a while. Little do they know that the girls are on to them and soon the the tables are turned on the boys!

Gable's ability to write it from the perspective of Bobby is well crafted, as we get a sense for how his poor work ethic and jealousy towards his sister makes him a deserving candidate for the makeover the girls gave him.

Arguably one of Gable and Acosta's most simple and direct force feminization tales, which is the overall charm of this tale. One of the best all time high school force feminization stories is Robyn's The Exchange Student, which Gable writes in the tradition of that author. The less is more approach works great in the story, but there is a hiccup in the flow of the story when the actual humiliation for the boys happens after they get their makeover. The capture of the boys (which is the jewel in the author's story skill sets), bondage and dialogue are all well crafted, but the "other" facial makeover that one of the boys got felt a little out of place in this story. A little over the top, but I guess it depend on how much you think the boys deserved it?

Bobby now "Britney" being pegged by Ashley!

From the book:

"Well brother dear...or should I say sister, are you ready for some fun?" asked Scarlet from the top of the stairs.
"Oh don't tease him too badly," mocked Ashley motioning to my mouth, which was now stuffed with an old pair of panties, securely tied in place with yet another pair of pantyhose. "You know he can't reply."
"Mmm, I think I could get used to that," joked Scarlet. To my dismay both girls laughed at my helplessness.
"This is going to be so much fun," agreed Ashley. "I can't wait until Tony is just as securely trapped."
"Wow! My brother has sexy legs," admired Scarlett. "We can put them to good use, I'm sure. Let's take him inside and stash him in a closet so that he'll be out of the way for Tony."
With Scarlett leading the way, Ashley marched me into my own bedroom closet. She made me kneel on the floor and turned the pantyhose hobbling my ankles into a hog tie. She then gently pushed me over until I fell on my side. The she laughed at me and blew me a kiss before closing the closet door. 

Link:
Valentines Day Massacre 

Thank you for the comments on Robyn's The Exchange Student

I don't mean to sound bossy or rude, but I just wanted to say, I have gotten so many hits for "Zoe" from The Exchange Student for that I thank everyone.

However could everyone who enjoyed the illustration from which it originated from, please leave a comment on Robyn's story? Just one sentence or some nice words would be nice over at her Fictionmania story review page.

That is all thank you all again!

Quote of the Week: "The Exchange Student"

Last week I choose to pick Robyn's The Exchange Student as my Story Pick of the Week. This week I decided it be neat to have another story besides the Martin Hastings Saga have the visual spotlight (don't worry Martin fans, I have content on the way!). If you haven't read the story I strongly suggest reading it. The illustration is from the opening scene of the story with "Zoe" being admired by his sister and friends. 

Robyn, if you are reading this, Thank you for taking the time to write this lovely piece of erotica fiction! Please also take the time to leave me feedback and write something nice on Robyn' story review page. Thanks!

The following is small sample of the story:

"Come along, Zoe, dear," Renee taunted.
"Oh, yes...come on down, where we can all see you," chimed in Tina.

It was my sister Melissa, at the top of the stairs, that gave me a little 
push. "Your public awaits, Miss LeMercier," she giggled.

And here I was, dressed up like a seventeen-year-old girl, at the beck and
call of the three young women we wronged. And there, at the foot of the
stairs, was my mother, who agreed to the whole thing. She was smiling at my 
pretty predicament, and snapped off a few pictures with her digital camera.  

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"The Exchange Student" (Story Pick of the Week)

Hi Everyone! 

Been a busy week with finals and getting ready for a graduation for a relative. One escape I have is escaping into erotica fiction, so one thing I wanted to start was a story pick of the week. 

This week is "The Exchange Student" By Robyn, (The GIRL Wonder). In this forced crossdress story James Budd is a high school boy being punished (never discussed) for a crime against three girls. As punishment he is then dressed like a teenage girl by his mother and sister, Melissa. He is then ordered not to speak any English, only French (James was born in Quebec) and must only speak in broken English. He is then ordered to pose as French exchange student named Zoe LeMercier. No one knows this except his family, the three girls he wronged and  his best friend Danny who is also being punished for his part in the crime by being ordered to take cute "Zoe" out on dates!

The story contains great dialogue and very cute outfits that Zoe is forced to wear. The story gets interesting as Zoe keeps getting himself more time in a skirt by breaking the set of rules given to him by the girls! The climax is nice, but keeps you leaving hungry for more! Great read!

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