Monday, January 3, 2022

Story Pick of the Week: The Boyfriend

 This week's Story of the Week comes from Portia Jarttele her  story, "The Boyfriend" is a fun simple read with enough saucy bits and a bit of tension! 

After failing to prevent the robbery and molestation of him and his girlfriend Joanne during their date, Mike is put into sexy lingerie as punishment for not even attempting to stop the robbery. His makeover  and emasculation is quickly escalated when he is given an even girlier makeover. 

Aside from being a very simple read, there is depth in the form of Joanne feeling frustrated, helpless and anger she holds after the traumatic robbery which she takes out on Mike...I mean now Marilyn!  

The makeover at the dress shop is very good and the dialogue on the part of Joanne is great! Good story. 

The story is in four parts and is on Fictionmania for free.


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"The Boyfriend"



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