This Story Pick of the Week comes from Lisa Lovelace on the Fictionamania website, her story is Fair Lady. It is a story about a young male teen kicked out of his blue collar New Jersey home after being discovered trying on some girl's clothes by his father. He wanders New York City for a few days with no where to go really until he encounters two eccentric upper class gentlemen. Out of their kindness they take the young man into their home in Manhattan and help the newly named, "Liza" become a proper young lady of upper New York City class.
Sample:
Wow," I said. "I think I'm about to die of an overdose of cute. Isn't it kinda over the top in terms of girliness?"
"No," he said. "Our boys will love it. I don't think they've ever worn a stitch of female clothing themselves, but they seem to get off on making me look as feminine as possible. So do I, fortunately."
"You're very pretty," I said.
"Looks like I have competition in that department," he said.
I unzipped the dress, wriggled into it and threaded my arms into the little lace-trimmed sleeves. Pierce zipped me up and fussed with it until he was satisfied. He parted my hair in the middle and pulled it back with some little pearl clips. In the mirror, I looked like a rich girl from the Hamptons on her way to a sweet sixteen party. I'd never felt so young, so fresh, so feminine.
This story was just wonderful.
ReplyDeleteYes, it was a hot read. It could easily be made into a RomCom movie. A feel good story.
ReplyDeleteBeing a freak for oral and anal, I might have enjoyed a scene or two of Pierce servicing the two gentlemen. All in all though a very nice offering.
DeleteLisa writes a lot of great stories.
DeleteYeah it shows she is a good writer. But I agree, had she added a bit more or even alluded to more sexual moments..
DeleteIt would have been more hotter. Still a great read.